G'day Grant
Get that chisel out and have more of a lash at it.
It looks too chunky and overbraced.
If you are concerned about chiselling into your top put a couple of layers of masking tape on either side of the brace while you are carving.
I'd be trying to make those braces tall and narrow so take the bevels almost down to the soundboard. (more a vee profile) And take a some more out of the scallops.
The finger braces look as though they could come down too.
I'm just about to do a cedar top the same thickness as yours with bracess at 6mm x 12mm and I'd be looking at having a lot less timber attached to the soundboard before I started listening for decent tap tones
Depends on your top but cedar is generally not as stiff across the grain as spruce so bear that in mind when taking down the finger braces. You could also change the angle of the x-brace to stiffen it up but it's too late for that on this one, but bear it in mind for the future. I can't really see the x-brace angle from your pics.
Bear in mind that Dave and I tend to make everything fairly light as far as bracing goes so I may be biased in that direction. But I think you could very safely take to this top with more severity to achieve a better result.
Throw some more pics up as you are progressing through it.
Cheers